干货丨写作就像做蛋糕 如何把蛋糕做得更加美味呢

　　Step1 ：我们需要做蛋糕的材料------写作内容(审题)

　　写作先进步就是搞明白作文题目，然后找到相对应范围内的材料。比如说课余生活，那么就需要围绕课余生活来写。审题的时候要仔细，特别是关于字数等方面的要求。

　　有了材料我们的蛋糕就能做出来了吗?显然不行，我们还需要知道

　　Step2：这些材料的添加顺序------写作内容顺序安排(写作思路/写作大纲) 写作思路：

　　如：应聘模板

　　1. 写信的目的

　　I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of…

　　2. 自我介绍(个人情况)

　　I do well in/ am good at/ am strong in …

　　I have a good knowledge of /ability to do sth

　　3. 结尾

　　I’m looking forward to…

　　I would appreciate it very much if you could give me this chance.

　　知道了做蛋糕的步骤就能做出蛋糕了嘛?也不行，我们还需要让有工具，将蛋糕做成基本的形状。

　　Step3：做蛋糕的工具------写作句型

　　黄金句型总结：

　　1、“为什么”：可转化成because+句子, so+句子，

　　if not....will...., needless to say(不用说)，

　　the reason why +定语从句，the reason is that +表语从句

　　2、“感受”：利用形式主语，强调句“it is happy that+从句”

　　It’s important/ necessary for us to do ….

　　3、“做什么”：动作之后加宾语从句

　　4、“建议”: had better(not) do sth

　　Why don’t you do sth? = Why not do sth?

　　How/ What about doing sth?

　　It’s a/an good/ great/ excellent… idea to do ….

　　It’s suggested that …

　　…suggest/ advise that +从句(谓语动词用should +动词原形)

　　You should do ….

　　祈使句句型

　　5、“承接”：on one hand, on the other hand 一方面……, 另一方面……..

　　at first, to begin with, firstly, above all, first of all,

　　the first is that+句子：首先

　　in the second place, secondly ：第二

　　moreover, what’s more, in addition, besides： 此外，而且

　　last but not least, lastly, at last, finally ：较后

　　6、“总结”：in a word, in short, all in all, in conclusion, generally speaking, to sum up

　　It is concluded that+句子

　　Only in this way can we do … 只有通过这种方式，我们才能…….

　　7、“看法”：as far as I am concerned = as far as I know 就我所知

　　from my point of view, in my opinion, as for me, personally

　　my favorite way is to…because…

　　I hold the opinion that+句子

　　8、“计划，打算”：intend /decide/ mean/ plan/ determine to do …

　　make up one’s mind to do …

　　make a decision to do …

　　be going to do…

　　be determined to do…

　　It’s a good choice to do …

　　Although/ Though …., it’s really worth doing…

　　这样，我们的蛋糕基本就样子做出来了，但好不好吃呢?不一定!好吃的蛋糕需要一些额外的装饰和添加。

　　Step 4：点缀/技巧------作文润色(亮点词/句/修饰语)

　　黄金圣衣句型：

　　【作用】增强语气+凑字神器

　　1. It is obvious/self-evident that ..., for... 很明显/不言而喻...因为...

　　【亮点】主语从句、形式主语、高级单词、原因状语从句

　　【屌丝句】Communication is important.

　　【靓仔句】It is obvious that communication is of great importance, for it is the most common daily activity.

　　2. There is no doubt that ..., in that... 毫无疑问...因为...

　　【亮点】there be句型、双重否定、同位语从句、原因状语从句

　　【屌丝句】Communication is important.

　　【靓仔句】There is no doubt that communication is of great importance, in that it is the most common daily activity.

　　3. No one can deny ..., which... 肯定的是...(补充说明)...

　　【亮点】双重否定、定语从句

　　【屌丝句】Communication is important.

　　【靓仔句】No one can deny communication is of great importance, which is the most common daily activity.

　　4. ...needless to say... 不用说

　　【亮点】插入语

　　【屌丝句】Communication is important.

　　【靓仔句】Needless to say, communication is of great importance.=Communication, needless to say, is of great importance.

　　5. It goes without saying that...; consequently, as a result..../不用说...因此...

　　【亮点】形式主语、主语从句、较通俗

　　【屌丝句】Communication is important.

　　【靓仔句】It goes without saying that communication is of great importance; consequently, /as a result we should learn some tips about it.

　　写作较重要的还是多写多练，把平时课文中的句型和背得高级句型运用到自己的作文中!要相信经过反复训练和修改，较终你的文章就是阅卷老师眼睛中较亮的那颗星星!

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