高考英语写作 读后续写如何获取高分

　　一、题型解读

　　读后续写给出的阅读材料一般是350词以内的记叙文。考生要续写的150词的文字与所给阅读材料构成一个完整的故事。一般来说，记叙文浅显易懂，但故事情节曲折动人，故事线索的逻辑性也较强。阅读材料虽然是一篇不完整的文章，但是它有趣且内容能延伸，考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。这就要求考生在读懂所给阅读材料的基础上，在规定时间内展开合理的想象力，并运用所学的英语知识完成一篇约150词的续写。考生所续写的部分要有创新性和想象力，不是照抄原文或胡编乱造，同时，还要带有原文色彩(必须使用所给阅读材料5个以上标有下划线的关键词语)。该题型分值25分，建议用时30分钟左右。

　　二、评分标准

　　评分时，阅卷老师会将作文分成五档，具体打分表见下文。评分时，阅卷老师会首先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，较后给分。

　　具体档次赋分

　　三、注意事项

　　在进行读后续写写作训练或诊断过程中，要注意以下几点：

　　四、考场攻略

　　1.阅读语言材料，按照when、where、who、what和how五大方面提炼出故事的主要脉络

　　2.结合两个续写段落的首句充分发挥想象，预测故事的大致走向

　　3.结合画线词语勾勒更加丰富的故事细节

　　4.在完成初稿后加以润色，使用更加具体、准确的词汇来刻画环境、动作、心理和对话

　　五、样题范例

　　(2018年6月浙江高考真题)

　　阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

　　It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

　　We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.

　　His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

　　In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

　　注意:

　　1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

　　2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

　　3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

　　4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

　　Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

　　Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.

　　分析:

　　（理）已知线索：去西部荒野——体验农场生活——骑马去森林（父亲带作者去“西部荒野”，喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，作者心生向往，于是亲身上马体验，和父亲一同骑马走向森林……）

　　（定）可续写线索：迷路？找到回农场的方法？回到农场？

　　（细）1. 先进段所给首句“Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.”这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从兔子出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写因追赶兔子而迷路，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2. 第二段所给首句“We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.”这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的嘱托——不要误了晚饭、不要迷路，可以从如何寻路返回入手去写续文。前文提示农场附近有河流，并且river为标有下划线的关键词语，所以可以从沿着河流回到农场的角度拓展。

　　◆ 续写词汇已给提示词汇：dad，Uncle Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight话题激活词汇：情感：panic，relief，nervous，worried动作：run，cry，think to oneself环境：scenery，mountain，range，valley，river，lake，forest，sun，set，wind，blow

　　（调）优异范例

　　Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.

　　Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almoston the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.

　　优秀表达：

　　There was nothing left ...but ...没有......除了......

　　a series of fruitless attempt一系列徒劳的尝试

　　for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.for引导原因状语从句+定语从句

　　on the edge of breaking down 在崩溃的边缘

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